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⭐⭐必背詞語搭配

1。人們普遍認為 It is commonly believed/ recognized that…

2。社會發展的必然結果 the inevitable result of social development。經濟的快速發展 the rapid development of economy

3。人民生活水平的顯著提高/ 穩步增長the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard

4。先進的科學技術 advanced science and technology

5。面臨新的機遇和挑戰 be faced with new opportunities and challenges

6．熱烈的討論/ 爭論 a heated discussion/ debate

7。引起了廣泛的公眾關注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention

8。不可否認 It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…

9。熱烈的討論/ 爭論 a heated discussion/ debate

10。 有爭議性的問題 a controversial issue

11。完全不同的觀點 a totally different argument

12。一些人 …而另外一些人 … Some people…， while others…

13。 就我而言/ 就個人而言 As far as I am concerned， / Personally，

……。。。（篇幅原因，只展示部分）

⭐⭐好用到爆的銜接詞（專治寫作沒邏輯）

一、引出話題

首先

first of all， in the first place， to begin with， to start with

根據…

according to， based on

據說

It is said that…

如…所示

as is shown in

如你所知

as you know

眾所周知

as is known to all

二、提出觀點

表達個人見解

My personal view is that

It seems to me that

I tend to believe that

I am of the opinion that

I would argue that

In my experience

三、遞進

另外

what‘s more， furthermore， moreover， besides， in addition，apart from， additonally

更糟糕的是

what’s worse， worse still， to make matters worse

更重要的是

more importantly

同樣的

likewise

更何況

still less

四、舉例子部分

For example，

For instance，

A good illustration of this is

If we take an example

Evidence for this is provided by

We can see this when

五、概括部分

Generally speaking，

On the whole，

……tends。。。。。

Typically，

By and large

……tends。。。。。

。。may/might/could。。。。。

Often/frequently/sometimes/usually

六、總結部分：

To summarise

In conclusion

On balance，

This is a complex issue with no clear answers

If we look at both sides of the argument

⭐⭐12個話題語料庫

一、寫作語料庫－健康類

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三、寫作語料庫-大學與職業教育

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⭐⭐十大高分句型（豐富寫作句型）

1 否定句

1）

Instead of

indulging in playing computer games， children

should be taught how to

benefit from useful information on the internet。

應該教孩子們如何從網際網路獲取有益的資訊，而不是沉溺於玩電腦遊戲。

2）

On no account (Under no circumstances) can we ignore the immense value of

knowledge。

我們絕不能忽視知識的巨大價值。

3）College students take part-time jobs

not for

more money

but for

a better understanding of societies。

大學生參加兼職工作不是為了賺更多錢，而是為了更好地瞭解社會。

2 非限制性定語從句

1）Undoubtedly， practical courses can be used to the reality，

which

is of vital importance to their development in the future。

毫無疑問，實用性課程可以用於實際中，這對於他們未來發展是非常重要的。

2）Children tend to imitate what they have seen and heard on mass media， which is sometimes dangerous and harmful。

孩子們傾向於模仿大眾媒體上的所見所聞，這在有時是危險和有害的。

3）The majority of students believe that part-time jobs will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills， which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets。

大部分學生相信業餘工作會使他們有更多機會發展人際交往能力， 這對他們未來找工作是非常有好處的。

3 讓步句

1）This view is widely acknowledged；

however

， there is little evidence that smoking is beneficial to people’s health。

這個觀點被廣泛認可，然而，幾乎沒有證據表明吸菸對人們健康有利。

2）

Although (While)

the computer has been widely used in class， it cannot replace the role of teachers。

儘管計算機已經廣泛用於課堂，但是它不能取代教師的作用。

3）

Reasonable as

the opinion sounds，

it cannot bear much

analysis。

雖然這個觀點聽起來有道理，但是它經不住分析。

4 It引導的句子

1）

It is hard to imagine what

our life

would look like without

computers in modern society。

很難想象如果現代社會沒有了計算機，我們的生活會變成什麼樣子。

2）

It is conceivable that

being physically active does good to health。

可想而知，積極參加體育活動有利於身體健康。

3）

It is a highly controversial issue whether

women should join the armed forces or not。

女性是否應該參軍是一個非常有爭議的問題。

5 假設句

1）

If

we destroy old buildings，

then

we will ruin the traditional culture and heritage。

如果我們推倒老房子，就要破壞傳統的文化和遺產。

2）You

would

miss the chance to interact with other students

if

you used internet at home。

假如你在家上網，你就會失去與其他同學交流的機會。

3）

Once

you change your present job，

you will

be faced with the danger of being unemployed。

一旦你變換了現在的工作，就面臨著失業的危險。

6 倒裝句

1）

Only in this way can

the problem be tackled properly。

有這樣才能妥善地解決這個問題。

2）

Only when

children take arduous efforts can they become successful。

只有當孩子們付出艱苦的努力他們才能獲得成功。

3）

Not only does

studying in school serve academic purpose， but students learn how to handle interpersonal relations。

在校學習不僅為了學術目的，而且還可以學會如何處理人際關係。

7 強調句

1）

It is for the benefit

of maintaining the ecological balance that human beings ought to protect the endangered animal species。

正是為了維持生態平衡，人類才應該保護地球上瀕危的動物物種。

2）

It is not until

people suffer from some fatal diseases such as SARS and AIDS that they are becoming aware of how significant it is for the government to invest more money in medical care。

直到人們患了像非典和愛滋病這樣致命的疾病時，才意識到政府把更多的錢投入到醫療上的重要性。

3）

Nothing in the world is more valuable than

health。

沒有什麼比健康更有價值。

8 比較句

1）S

tudies show that

juvenile delinquency rates are

twice as high for

youngsters from single-parent families

as for

those in traditional households。

（同級比較）研究表明來自單親家庭的青少年犯罪率是來自傳統家庭的兩倍

2）Generally speaking， people in modern times enjoy less leisure time

than

they did previously。

（比較級）一般說來，現代人比過去享有更少的休閒時間。

3）

Compared with

those with different abilities， children with intelligence do more well in their school work and intelligence tests。

與不同能力的孩子相比，聰明的孩子在學業和智力測驗方面表現更加突出。

9 插入語

1）Computers， most important of all， create wide communication around the world。

最重要的是，計算機在世界範圍內建立了廣泛的交流。

2）Providing more parking areas，

in the long run

， has proved to be a practical way out in many large cities in the world。

從長遠的利益來看，提供更多的停車位被證實是許多世界大城市切實可行的出路。

3）Observing local culture，

consciously and unconsciously

， can reduce the chance of offending the locals， or it will lead to the embarrassment and even conflict。

無論是否意識到，遵循當地的文化可以減少冒犯當地人的機會，否則，就會導致尷尬甚至衝突。

10 原因句

1）Violent films can do harm to young people， because they contains numerous negative information。

暴力影片對年輕人是有害的，因為其中包含大量負面資訊。

2）Human beings are chiefly responsible for wild animal extinction。

野生動物滅絕的主要責任在人類。

3）We should attribute （ascribe）medical advances to the animals which do substantial contributions to the experiment。

我們應該把醫學的發展歸因於動物對實驗做出的巨大貢獻。

11 趨勢變化描述

（1）主語+ 動詞（increased）+副詞+ 資料（注意主語的明確性）

The consumptionof beef increasedsharply from 1 million tons in 1995to 2 million in 2000in the UK。

主語（China）+ 謂語（enjoyed/ saw） +賓語（a slight increase/decrease）from… to…

The initial five yearssawa sharp increase inthe beef consumptionby 1 million in the UK。Britainwitnesseda sharp increase inbeef consumptionby 1 million between 1999 and 2000。

There be 冠詞+形容詞+名詞（a sharp rise）in。。。+ 資料

There wasa sharp increase inthe consumption of beeffrom 1 million in 1999 to 2 million in 2000inBritain。

⭐⭐寫作高頻替換詞

（只要串幾個高頻替換詞作文瞬間高階）

1。important = crucial （extremely important）， significant（amount or effects large enough to be important）

2。common = universal， ubiquitous（if something is ubiquitous， it seems to be every where）

3。abundant = ample （enough and usually extra）， plentiful （enough for people‘s needs and wants）

4。stick = adhere， cling （hold on something tightly）

5。neglect = ignore。 （difference： neglect means someone has not paid enough attention to something； ignore means no attention。）

6。near = adjacent （two things next to each other）， adjoin（the same as adjacent）

7。pursue = woo （man woos woman， old-fashioned）， seek （if you seek sth， you try to obtain it。 FORMAL）

8。accurate = precise （precise is exact and accurate in all details）， exact （correct in every detail）

9。vague = obscure （unknown or known by only a few people）

10。top = peak， summit

11。competitor = rival， opponent （especially in sports and politics）

12。blame = condemn （if you condemn something， you say it is very bad and unacceptable）

13。opinion = perspective， standpoint（means looking at an event or situation in a particular way）

14。fame = prestige （describe those who are admired）， reputation

15。build = erect （you can erect something as buildings， FORMAL）， establish

16。insult = humiliate （do something or say something which makes people feel ashamed or stupid）

17。complain = grumble （complain something in a bad-tempered way）

18。primary = radical （very important and great in degree）， fundamental

19。relieve = alleviate （alleviate means you make pain or sufferings less intense or severe）

20。force = coerce into （coerce means you make someone do something she/he does not want to）， compel

21。enlarge = magnify （magnify means make something larger than it really is）

22。complex = intricate （if something is intricate， it often has many small parts and details）

23。 Lonely = solitary （if someone is solitary， there is no one near him/her）

24。small = minuscule （very small）， minute，

25。praise = extol （stronger than praise）， compliment（polite and political）

26。hard-working = assiduous （someone who is assiduous works hard or does things very thoroughly）

27。difficult = arduous （if something is arduous， it is difficult and tiring， and involves a lot of efforts）

28。poor （soil） = barren， infertile （used to describe the soil is so poor that plants cannot be planted on it）

29。fragile = brittle， vulnerable （someone who is vulnerable is easily hurt emotionally or physically）

30。show = demonstrate （to demonstrate a fact means to make it clear to people。）

31。big = massive （large in size， quantity， or extent）， colossal （use this word， you emphasize something’s large）， tremendous （informal）

32。avoid = shun （if someone shuns something， she/he deliberately avoid that something or keep away from it。）

33。fair = impartial （someone who is impartial is able to give a fair opinion or decision on something。）

34。attack = assault （physically attack someone）， assail （attack violently）

35。dislike = abhor （abhor means you hate something to a extreme extent for moral reasons）， loathe （dislike very much）

36。ruin = devastate （it means damage something very badly， or utterly destroy it。）

37。always = invariably （the same as always， but better than always）

38。forever = perpetual （a perpetual state never changes）， immutable （something immutable will never change or be changed）

39。surprise = startle （it means surprise you slightly）， astound （surprise you to a large degree）， astonish（the same as astound）

40。enthusiasm = zeal （a great enthusiasm）， fervency （sincere and enthusiasm）

41。quiet = tranquil （calm and peaceful）， serene （calm and quiet）

42。expensive = exorbitant （it means too expensive that it should be）

43。luxurious = lavish （impressive and very expensive）， sumptuous （grand and very expensive）

44。boring = tedious （if you describe something tedious， you mean it is boring and frustrating）

45。respect = esteem （if you esteem someone， you respect and admire him/her。 FORMAL）

46。worry = fret （if you fret about something， you worry about it）

47。cold = chilly （unpleasantly cold）， icy（extremely cold）

48。hot = boiling （very hot）

49。dangerous = perilous （very dangerous， hazardous） （dangerous， especially to people’s safety and health）

50。only = unique （the only one of its kind）， distinctive；

51。stop = cease （if something ceases， it stops happening or existing）

52。part = component （the components of something are the parts that it is made of）

53。result = consequence （the results or effects of something）

54。obvious = apparent， manifest

55。based on = derived from （can see or notice them very easily）

56。quite = fairly

57。pathetic = lamentable （very uncomfortable and disappointing）

58。field = domain （a particular field of thought， activities or interest）

59。appear = emerge （come into existence）

60。whole = entire （the whole of something）

61。wet = moist （slightly wet）， damp （slightly wet）， humid （very damp and hot）

62。wrong = erroneous （incorrect or partly correct）

63。difficult = formidable

64。change = convert （change into another form）

65。typical = quintessential （this word means represent a typical example of something）

66。careful = cautious （very careful in order to avoid danger）， prudent（careful and sensible）

67。ability = capacity， capability （the same as ability）

68。strange = eccentric （if some one is eccentric， she/he behaves in a strange way， or his/her opinion is different from most people）

69。rich= affluent （if you are affluent， you have a lot of money）

70。use = utilize （the same as use）

71。dubious = skeptical （if you are skeptical about something， you have doubts on it。）

72。satisfy = gratify （if you are gratified by something， it gives you pleasure and satisfaction）

73。short = fleeting， ephemeral （if something is ephemeral， it lasts a short time）

74。Scholarship = fellowship

75。smelly = malodorous （used to describe an unpleasant smell）

76。ugly = hideous （if something is hideous， it is very ugly or unattractive）

77。attractive = appealing （pleasing and attractive）， absorbing （something absorbing can attract you a great deal）

78。diverse = miscellaneous （a miscellaneous groups consists of many different kinds of things）

79。disorder = disarray， chaos

80。crazily = frantically （used to describe someone who behaves in a wild and uncontrolled way）

81。rapid = meteoric （ATTENTION： meteoric is only used to describe someone achieves success quickly）

82。ordinary = mundane （very ordinary and not at interesting or unusual）

83。despite = notwithstanding （FORMAL）

84。best = optimal （used to describe the best level something can achieve）

85。sharp = acute （severe and intense）

86。unbelievable = inconceivable （if you deem something inconceivable， you think it very unlike to happen ）

87。puzzle = perplex （something perplex someone means it confuses and worries him/her because he/she does not understand it）

88。method = avenue （a way of getting something done）

89。famous = distinguished （used to describe people who are successful in their career）

90。ancient = archaic （extremely old and extremely old-fashioned）

91。decorate = embellish （embellish means make something look more attractive via decorating it with something else）

92。possible = feasible （if something is feasible， it can be done， made or achieved）

93。so = consequently， accordingly

94。rare = infrequent （doesn’t happen often）

95。greedy = rapacious （greedy and selfish）

96。individuals，characters， folks = people，persons

97。nowadays = currently

98。dreadful， unfavorable， poor， adverse， ill = be less impressive

99。reap huge fruits = get many benefits

100。for my part， from my own perspective = in my opinion

最後分享一波Simons寫作範文（三連拿走哦）：

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